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I'm sorry for letting
You get under my skin
I'm sorry for forgetting
You didn't want in

I'm sorry for being
A leech on your skin
I'm sorry for not seeing
You weren't letting me in

I'm sorry for crying
My tears stained your skin
I'm sorry for dying
When you finally let me in

I'm sorry for living
And for breathing on your skin
I'm sorry for sinning
The lie I was living in

I'm sorry for hurting
Each time you felt my skin
I'm sorry for flirting
After the danger set in

I'm sorry for carving
Lines into my skin
And I'm sorry for starving
I thought you wanted me thin

But most of all I'm sorry
For stealing from your life
For deluding that maybe one day
I would be your wife

The day we failed
Was the day I died
I wrote this to get some feelings off my chest - or rather, out of my heart.

-shrugs-

(c) Carly <-me. aka twistedwhisper, Twisty, frozenmirage, princesstwister, etc. etc.
5:50pm 7/4/06
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pixelatednymph Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2006
=o....

This was incredibly heartfelt.

Kudos to you, twisty-baby...


<3
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foxey-grl Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2006
I'm sorry for crying
My tears stained your skin
I'm sorry for dying
When you finally let me in


is my fav paragraph, beside that.. it has a great idea, and it is very sad.. but it seems repeditive.. and the beat is hard to find (i have still not found it)
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TyraMcKinnon Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2006
You know I love this. I really really do. ^.^
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